EROMANGA
HALL OF FAME

A short piece stands if it can carry a single device to the end without letting it slip. “Mitchaku! Onee-san ni Fukakouryoku kara Shibushibu Nuite Moratta Hanashi” holds one device, a chain of accidents, across all twenty-eight pages, and that is why it stands in the hall.

A man and an older woman who works in an office are pressed together without warning on a packed commuter train, and the story follows what passes between them. Events are pushed along by the lurch of the carriage and sudden stops, in the manner of the "lucky pervert" comedy, and the starting point is a situation in which he could easily be taken for a groper. The official genre tags include train, office lady and female-led.

What readers single out together is the heroine's acting. The cold eyes and the sulky voice never crack from first page to last, and several reviewers also name the beauty of how her eyes are drawn. The other point is pace: the "unavoidable circumstances" of the title become the book's structural principle, and it runs to its close with nothing wasted.

Sakagaki, the artist behind the circle FDSP, released the circle's first book in 2023, set on an overnight coach: Tonari no Onee-san ga Erosugite Shikottetara Kossori Nuite Kureta Hanashi. This is the circle's third, and once again the setting is the inside of a vehicle.

It was released on DLsite in 2024, and most of its readers came through FANZA. It also has an entry in an English-language manga database. It stands 65th among the hall's doujin works.